When you create a title for something you wrote, how careful are you to choose the right words?
Here’s one example of a not-so-effective title:
Tests confirm chocolates contaminated – CAA
And here’s the very brief news article the title is for:
The Consumer Affairs Authority(CAA) told the Colombo Magistrate Court today that test results from Singapore confirmed that the milk powder imported by Edna chocolates contained Melamine.
Hmm. Somehow, I think it would have been more effective had they said something like:
Tests confirm milk contaminated – CAA
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